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प्रिय मित्र गणेशजी बहुत-बहुत…
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2010-12-23T14:36:56.199Z
Abhay Kant Jha Deepraaj
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<div id="Quilltextarea1_div" style="width: 99%; height: 99%; outline-style: none; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div style="margin-left: 0em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-align: left;"><span><span><span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">प्रिय…</span></span></span></div>
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<div style="width: 99%; height: 99%; outline-style: none; white-space: pre-wrap;" id="Quilltextarea1_div"><div style="margin-left: 0em; white-space: pre-wrap; text-align: left;"><span><span><span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">प्रिय</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">मित्र</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">गणेश</span><span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">जी</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">बहुत</span><span style="font-size: 12px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">-</span><span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">बहुत</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">धन्यवाद</span><span style="font-size: 12px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">,</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">कि</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">-</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">आप</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">ने</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">मेरी</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">रचना</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">को</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">पढ़ा</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">और</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">मेरे</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">प्रयास</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">को</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">सार्थक</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">माना</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">|</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">आपका</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">अभय</span> <span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">दीप</span><span style="font-size: 12px; padding: 1px; font-family: Mangal; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; color: #000000; background-color: #ffffff;">राज</span><span style="font-size: 12px;"> </span></span></span></div>
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हँस रहे हैं आप जिन ग़मग…
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2010-12-21T05:31:04.796Z
Er. Ganesh Jee "Bagi"
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<p><span style="font-size: medium;">हँस रहे हैं आप जिन ग़मगीन सांसों पर मेरी, <br/>दोस्तों, दिल में सुलगती आग का</span> <span style="font-size: medium;">काला</span> <span style="font-size: medium;">धुंआ है.</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size: medium;">बढ़िया प्रयास, अच्छी ग़ज़ल <br/></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: medium;">हँस रहे हैं आप जिन ग़मगीन सांसों पर मेरी, <br/>दोस्तों, दिल में सुलगती आग का</span> <span style="font-size: medium;">काला</span> <span style="font-size: medium;">धुंआ है.</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size: medium;">बढ़िया प्रयास, अच्छी ग़ज़ल <br/></span></p>