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सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Saurabh Pandey on August 21, 2012 at 10:20pm

You are right, Dr. Prachi, it is not that only after a compunction feeling heart goes for offerance. A soulful heart pours all its feelings through tears and we see a Krishna with Kuchela (Sudama).

Purifying are the tears of your love my Lord,
Let them take me to castle of silence so deep…
Let me freeze over passing sensation of beats and breaths
And emerge me with brilliance of astral eyes peep…

Beautiful ! Especially the last line.. .

Thanks for sharing a beautiful rendition.. .

सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on August 22, 2012 at 11:49am

Thanks Respected Saurabh Pandey Ji..

Soul is none other than the omnipresent spirit. When it realizes it's vast spread it flows to rejoice the union with infinite.. then no offerings, no material things, no words are sufficient to express the love towards LORD OF LIFE, and the tears which flows like river are soothing purifying and the sweetest offering to LORD by Oneself.

Thanks you reached to the essence of these lines and appreciated them.

Regards.

 

Permalink Reply by vijay nikore on February 13, 2013 at 10:19am

Respected Prachi ji:

 

Moved by your poem where shall I begin!

There is  mastery in the  choice of words,

They were invented, as it were, by divine,

To  so  express  your  thoughts  sublime,

That while  you write,  for HIM  you pine!

How can  God, then, not  hear  and  say,

"Hear, true to Me is  this  devotee  mine!

 

What more can my words say!

Congratulations!

 

Vijay ... Feb. 12, 2013

सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on March 6, 2013 at 11:29pm

Thanks for your kind words of appreciation.

Permalink Reply by Vindu Babu on February 23, 2013 at 1:17pm

Touching verse respected ma'm.
Opening line reminds me keats' quoting.
Of course its soothing n purifying to pour myself in love.
Congrates!

सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on March 6, 2013 at 11:25pm

Heart felt thanks respected Vandana Tiwari ji, for letting these lines touch your heart. Regards.

Permalink Reply by ram shiromani pathak on March 6, 2013 at 8:47pm

Let me dance and sing the ecstasy of your melodious accords........

wow what a wonderfull line.

no words to say.................

सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on March 6, 2013 at 11:27pm

Thanks Dear Ram Shiromani Ji for your kind appreciation.