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Oh my soulmate! My divine companion!

Today, let me share my most sincere opinion.

 

It is true that you are my strongest passion

In fact above all the mature compassions.

 

This love is truly beyond all the worldly desires

Concurrently we crave to traverse the divine fires.

 

Let us be friends, beloved, inspiration, anything or everything

But we are a being of light, hankering for its source deep within.

 

Our lives are precious; we got it this time for some purpose divine

Not merely to be satisfied with humanly love and its pleasures shrine.

 

Darling! Today I want to reveal secret wish of my soul

In this embodiment let me play my long awaited role.

 

I yearn to echo as unstruck sound of absolute silence in your inner ears

And dissolve in your very being, within you as unconscious whispers.

 

I crave to merge as depth of void in tranquility of your spiritual absorption.

And escort you at every step in your heavenly path towards divine union.

 

I wish to spread as rose petals to carpet the corridor

From where you will pass through for ultimate merger.

 

Corporal incarnation is rewarded to merge in the kingdom so bright

Where, everything is fused eternally, which is immeasurable infinite.

 

So, darling I wish to request you for a truthful promise

Regardless of circumstances, that you will accomplish.

 

If you find me to be your inclination or necessitate addiction

Or an emotional trap attracting you with strong magnetism.

 

If you find me deviating you from divine route

Or becoming a hurdle in your drive towards absolute.

 

Then, promise to shed me as dry leaf and move ahead

For divine empire, you will not panic to break this silken thread.

 

Because, one thing I worship more than our togetherness

To rejoice the ecstasy of your unification with infinite Goddess.

 

Because I can’t also stay apart from my mother divine

I crave to amalgamate and radiate her glory and shine

 

What if our heavenly paths will depart in way of light

Ultimately I will be dissolved in you as you are same infinite

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Because i have understood you are not you and i am not i

in this contamination world, it is just an illusion and a big lie

Thanks dear Satish Ji for your lines.....  But I feel that the end which is already given is sufficient enough to summarize the essence of this composition.

Anyway, thanks for your suggestion. 

Thanks Resp. Satish Kumar Ji for feeling the depths of this precious composition and appreciating the lines having the zist and soul of this written expression.

Beautiful composition, Dr. Prachi !

  

I yearn to echo as unstruck sound of absolute silence in your inner ears

And dissolve in your very being, within you as unconscious whispers.

Waah ! These lines take the reader along and usher in to an elevated world. 

If you find me deviating you from divine route

Or becoming a hurdle in your drive towards absolute.

Then, promise to shed me as dry leaf and move ahead

For divine empire, you will not panic to break this silken thread.

What an awareness is getting propagated ! The characteristic of a true soul-mate is a beautifully defined.

Then,  I can not, but thank you for reminding me so eternal concept of 'Mahamrityunjay' mantra - उर्वारुकमिव बन्धनात् मृत्युर्मुक्षीय मामृतात् .. !! Simply superb !!!

Respected Saurabh Pandey Ji,

I am overwhelmed with deep sense of gratitude that this composition describing the selflessness of totally aware twin souls,took you along to an elevated world. 

Thanks for honoring this composition by mentioning, that these lines reminded you of  eternal concept of MAHAMRITUNJAYA MANRA...

Just Thanks for your precious inner vision to understand these lines...I yearn to echo as unstruck sound of absolute silence in your inner ears.

Thanks a lot.

 

You are same infinate

 

I wish to spread as rose petals to carpet the corridor

From where you will pass through for ultimate merger.

These are the precious thoughts for beloved ones ‘made for each other’

Or say ‘Ek  JAAN  DO  JISM’  and in another meaning “merger of our soul in God’

As we strongly assume “atma so parmaatma” it is the ultimate merger

The last line ultimately I will be dissolved I n you as yau are same infinte

Is the soul of your whole saying, that is what I could understand Madam

-Laxman Prasad Ladiwala 

Respected Lakshman Prasad Ladiwala Ji, heartfelt thanks for understanding this composition, and appreciating the hidden thoughts.

Dear Prachi ji:


Having joined obo only a couple of months ago,

one by one I am reading your poems....


They are like प्रसाद for each day.


I am simply overhelmed on reading

YOU  ARE  SAME  INFINITE !


It is not  just a poem.

It is a powerful creation.

Idea after idea so unique,

grabbed  me  like

few creations ever have.


Asking for understanding,

with a humble plea, nevertheless,

making the relationship so sublime!

Who would not cherish a friend so kind!


Thank you for the gift of your poem.


Regards, always.

Vijay


Feb 14, 2013

Respected Vijay Ji,

My sincere thanks and gratitude to you for giving time to my poems and reading them to their depth.

Thanks for calling me a friend.... God comes as friend to teach the most valuable lessons of our life. I am blessed to have such a precious friend like you.

Thanks for appreciating the uniqueness of IDEA of this poem.

Regards.

//

Because, one thing I worship more than our togetherness

To rejoice the ecstasy of your unification with infinite Goddess.

 

Because I can’t also stay apart from my mother divine

I crave to amalgamate and radiate her glory and shine

 

What if our heavenly paths will depart in way of light

Ultimately I will be dissolved in you as you are same infinite//

So well said ... brings home the concept of  " when many become One ".

Superb creation !

Wish you Peace, wish you Bliss that you already are in.

Thanks for coming to this composition again..

 yearn to echo as unstruck sound of absolute silence in your inner ears

And dissolve in your very being, within you as unconscious whispers.

 

I crave to merge as depth of void in tranquility of your spiritual absorption.

And escort you at every step in your heavenly path towards divine union.

 

I wish to spread as rose petals to carpet the corridor

From where you will pass through for ultimate merger.

 

Corporal incarnation is rewarded to merge in the kingdom so bright

Where, everything is fused eternally, which is immeasurable infinite. 

beautiful concept Respected Prachi ji . 

RSS

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