"आदरणीय अशोक रक्ताले जी सृजन के भावों को आत्मीय मान से अलंकृत करने का दिल से आभार आदरणीय…"
ACCEPTANCE
ACCEPTANCE
You and I...
Two interminable possibilities,
ecstatic in innocent wonder,
like miniscule particles
sailing so swiftly
ever in space;
each independent,
there is no race.
It is not an inscrutable mystery.
Our trajectories impervious,
have no fear or frustration
of chance collision,
of inclusion or exclusion,
or of one being left behind,
for this is how we defined
Freedom ... Acceptance !
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-- Vijay Nikore
(original and unpublished)
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Permalink Reply by बृजेश नीरज on
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Beautiful! I have no words to explain the beauty of this poem.
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Permalink Reply by vijay nikore on
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Dear Brijesh ji:
Thank you for the honor you have given me with your beautiful words of appreciation.
I mean it. All the best to you.
Regards,
Vijay Nikore
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Permalink Reply by Vindu Babu on
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Venerable sir...
Really what a aphoristic poem!
In the two possibiliteis of ACCEPTANCE,first is most grasping bt sir i feel second is some obscure.
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Dear Vandana jee:
// Really what a aphoristic poem! // ...
Thank you for your heartfelt appreciation. It is very kind of you.
From your comment above I gather that you are thinking of
FREEDOM and ACCEPTANCE as the two possibilities. ( Please
correct me if I am wrong at it). In stead, the two possibilities in
the poem are the two people " YOU " and " I " referred to in the poem.
We ( YOU and I ) are not just two people, we are POSSIBILITIES that,
with our interaction, can bloom as beautiful flowers, or reach heights of
our respective imaginations, being inspiration to each other without being
a hinderance to each other, so that each of us can continue on our
beautiful "PATH" / "JOURNEY".
I have tried to pour my mind in to something that is largely " felt ", and about which I am
generally left speechless.... the Divine connection. Therefore, forgive me if I am not
explaining my feeling well.
This poem is about two people on their divine " JOURNEY ", who ACCEPT each other without conditions, give each other FREEDOM and rejoice in the beauty of this 'knowing' each other... i.e. " living a beautiful relationship ".
Let me hear from you your thoughts.
Regards,
Vijay Nikore
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Respected sir i salute ur MIGHTY PEN. I am extemely sorry to divert the sense of poem.Really there were two causes of my confusion-
first,most often as i know the word POSSIBILITY is used for CONDITION,so my mind coudn't catch that I&YOU may(might) b possibilties.
Second,the TITLE of the poem ACCEPTANCE leaded me to know 'the two possibilites,when acceptance takes place in relationship'
plz forbade me if I HURT HEART OF THE VERSE,now i will say after reading the gist(given by you) that theme of the poem is too valuable,construction is some mystic FOR ME.
With regards &honour
vandana -
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Permalink Reply by PRADEEP KUMAR SINGH KUSHWAHA on
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dear sir
i have no words to comment
for this is how we defined
Freedom ... Acceptance !
regards
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Dear Pradeep Ji:
Thank you.
Regards,
Vijay Nikore
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