Whose name is Earth
Creatures love it as it's like their mother;
Who give them birth.
Millions of livings beings live here,
Whom the beautiful planet care
All the things present here for life;
Is sufficient and fair
As the Earth never let them
To be in despair.
Millions of years ago, it was a giant ball of gas and fire
It was very young,
Then it began to be living
And with the rhythm of life, it began to sung.
There came the air,
That was developed with care
As withou it life wouldn't dare;
To expand itself and nothing would be fair.
Following air, water also came
And in the form of huge oceans and seas, it so immensly laid
That in the development of our mother Earth,
It greatly acted as an aid.
Bringing life to Earth was
It's main aim
To fulfil it,
The gifts of mother nature came.
It'd given us many things
Like air, water and the trees
So that the creatures include us
Would be able to live with the greatest ease.
It's because of Earth
Today Where we are,
As without it
We wouldn't be able to even drive a car
And in our thausands years evolutions
We wouldn't have came so far
We humans, are living just like the Earth's king,
It'a all because our mother Earth
Has given us;
Many wonderful and important things.
We should be thankful to our mother Earth
For the things; she lend
That would be wirh us,
Till we end.
There's no time to spare
We should honour the mother Earth and all it's creatures;
Also for us what she care
We should make it a good place for living
By making all the things well 'n' fair.
(original and unpublished)
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Congratulations great poetry. My blessings are with you. Go on Earth not only meet the sky is yours
Dear Shivam
nice poetry... very good effort on expressing evolution of Earth and your love towards the mother Earth.
Please accept heartiest Congratulations.
I want you to learn three basic things to do wonders in writing poetry
1. try to write as short sentences as you can (means no explanations, just the core)
2. try to learn syllables
3. make a collection of good rhyming words.
आवश्यक सूचना:-
1-सभी सदस्यों से अनुरोध है कि कृपया मौलिक व अप्रकाशित रचना ही पोस्ट करें,पूर्व प्रकाशित रचनाओं का अनुमोदन नही किया जायेगा, रचना के अंत में "मौलिक व अप्रकाशित" लिखना अनिवार्य है । अधिक जानकारी हेतु नियम देखे
2-ओपन बुक्स ऑनलाइन परिवार यदि आपको अच्छा लगा तो अपने मित्रो और शुभचिंतको को इस परिवार से जोड़ने हेतु यहाँ क्लिक कर आमंत्रण भेजे |
3-यदि आप अपने ओ बी ओ पर विडियो, फोटो या चैट सुविधा का लाभ नहीं ले पा रहे हो तो आप अपने सिस्टम पर फ्लैश प्लयेर यहाँ क्लिक कर डाउनलोड करे और फिर रन करा दे |
4-OBO नि:शुल्क विज्ञापन योजना (अधिक जानकारी हेतु क्लिक करे)
5-"सुझाव एवं शिकायत" दर्ज करने हेतु यहाँ क्लिक करे |
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