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सदस्य कार्यकारिणीPermalink Reply by rajesh kumari on April 3, 2013 at 11:47am

     Embracing the dark curtains

     of the smoky night,

     let the steaming hours

     evaporate the time,

 incredible thought from the depth of the heart,wonderful composition.congrats with best wishes.

Permalink Reply by vijay nikore on April 3, 2013 at 12:03pm

Respected 'Raj' ji:

 

My heartfelt thanks to you for your kind and precious appreciation.

 

Vijay Nikore

Permalink Reply by Vindu Babu on April 4, 2013 at 11:25pm

Respected sir namste!
Firstly cogrates fr publishing the verse.
Please clear following literary gems some more-
'Span the gaps with a personalized lonliness' &'desultorily'
Heart of the poem as i felt-
let the streaming hours
evaporate the time
to annihilate the undying nostalgia.
Very nice!

Permalink Reply by vijay nikore on April 5, 2013 at 11:28am

Dear Vandana ji:

 

//span the gaps with a personalized loneliness//

1....loneliness, when present, makes its home in our deepest core,

its a feeling that is too personal for that person to describe, and also it is difficult

for anyone else to really know it, or to know the depth of it.

2....there are times when we want to say something, but can't...we want to scream,

but can't because there is a lump in the heart ... this is the personalized loneliness.

//desultorily// ...painting desultorily

                          black with black

                          eager to erase the horizon

 

Here the reference is to a person who is left with only one color in the pallet, the color of loneliness, i.e. black,

and, using this 'only' color, he/she is desperate to remove the line of demarcation between the earth and the sky.

 

My heartfelt thanks for the interest you have shown.

 

Regards,

Vijay Nikore

 

Permalink Reply by vijay nikore on April 19, 2013 at 6:29am

Thank you Vijayashree ji for 'Liking' this poem.

Vijay Nikore