"अगले आयोजन के लिए भी इसी छंद को सोचा गया है।
शुभातिशुभ"
Yes my divine companion…that is You
Yes my divine companion…that is You
When I close my eyes
With the insight, I perceive a known image emerging so bright so prominent,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever I am in tears,
One who console me silently, only with his presence and takes me to glee,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever I become discouraged,
With the fear of trounce, the one who makes me find my hidden strength,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever loneliness surrounds me,
One who says me, that I am inside you as you and I witness him within,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever my faith on myself smash,
One who becomes my strength and empower me to have crown of success,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever I am entrapped in attachments,
One who makes me realize, the truth regardless of its bitterness or melody,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever the veils of relations causes pain,
One who looks my inner programming and burn all the layers of my ego,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever prejudices restricts me for new wisdom,
One who shakes me to awake me from the sleep of ignorance,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever I face the famine of love,
One who downpours on me, the whole cloud of love’s ecstasy,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever I am ignorant of my own self,
One who makes me aware of my hidden qualities and potentials,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Whenever I panic for worldly praises and curses,
One who says, that I am a fearless soul, ever free from life and death
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Who is dissolved as my essence, who smiles from my lips,
Who flows in my breath and dances in my heart beats,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
Sometimes as a flash of breeze, sometimes as a wave of love,
Who is covering me with the protective sheath of his devout consciousness,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
As a search of my aspiration, as a desire of my compassion,
Who is within me from beginning less beginning till endless end,
Yes my divine companion…that is You.
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Permalink Reply by PRADEEP KUMAR SINGH KUSHWAHA on
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really i also feel . only god .he is always with me in any circumstances.
nice written. congratulation.
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सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on -
Heartfelt thanks resp. Pradeep Kumar Kushwaha ji, for giving time to this composition..your oneness with it and and your valuable appreciation.
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सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Saurabh Pandey on -
One of the best compositions, Dr. Prachi.
Some of stanzas reflect the divinity within where some refers openly to the Guru. The inseparable entity, the Guru, who is the friend to that extent where one feel convinced with even his presence, like Arjuna got a friend in Krishna.
Thanks for sharing a gem.
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सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on -
Respected Saurabh Panday Ji,
Heartfelt thanks to reach to the essence of this conposition.
My GURU says "GURU is not a person" GURU is a TATVA..
This compsition is dedicated to the Love towards that TATVA (element) which is felt only at a particular consciousness level.
THANKS for your precious appreciation.
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सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Saurabh Pandey on -
Yes jee, you are right.
Guru does not appear before us only in physique, means, he is not merely a person but a feeling too. This feeling purifies the thought-waves. Purified thought-waves make the 'Chitta' enriched with all positivity..
Good .
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Permalink Reply by vijay nikore on
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Respected Prachi ji:
Your poems are always precious food for thought.
Tears .. discouragement .. lonliness .. occasional vaining faith (not lack of faith) ..
attachments .. prejudices .. famine of love .. By addressing these, you have
spoken for many aching hearts .. by touching these varied emotions that are natural
to most of us.
"from beginning less beginning till endless end" ... what a beautiful expression!
Vijay Nikore
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सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on -
Thanks Resp. Vijay Ji
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Permalink Reply by Vindu Babu on
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Venerable prachi ma'm really very spiritual and heart touching verse.My crucial points,when only devine Hands helpd me,just come before my eyes while going through the poem.
Excelent creation!
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सदस्य टीम प्रबंधनPermalink Reply by Dr.Prachi Singh on -
Thanks dear Vandana Tiwari Ji, for touching the essence of this poem.
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